How does this plot of the story sound 10 points please help comment are best?

It does sound very interesting, I would read it. But the teaser could be improved it really didn't make me want to read it, until i read what the plot really was, but i think you need more reason behind it. Like that the creatures feel they have been unjustly treated or the humans invaded their territory to make them want to hurt the people. Also on a side note the grammar was off in places and it made it difficult to understand what you were describing. And i didn't quite understand how finding the man she loves plays into the whole thing, you may want to give him more character and information in the beginning so people can see why it is so important for her to find him, but other than that it sounds very interesting. I wouldn't mind reading it when it was done.